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Post by Zero on Apr 14, 2018 3:06:16 GMT
Alright, already this is going to need some big balancing already. So, like with Professor Fether, I can see you've tried to balance around this, but man, c'mon.
Being able to shatter bones and break steel with just your hands and being able to lift several hundred tonnes is not going to fly.
And on top of this she carries obscene durability as well as being able to move at speeds of up to 40mph? It's a bit excessive. But, most importantly, nobody can beat this.
Being able to hit that hard gives you the one hit win fallacy, being able to lift several hundred tonnes effectively makes you impossible to hit if you catch the attack as well as being to no-sell just about any feat that requires strength, even if you don't catch attacks though you still have immense durability. And moving that quickly with jumps makes you impossible to get away from in a chase, and impossible to catch up to if you decide to bail.
Suffice to say, the character is unbeatable. You're going to need to cut down on what this forcefield can do variety wise as well as massively cutting down on some of the feats of strength it can pull off.
Her power allows for far too much to be done, practically unbeatable by anyone's standards. Make the changes, and alert a member of staff, I'll look over it again when you do.
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關芷若
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Post by 關芷若 on Apr 18, 2018 0:35:42 GMT
Any better?
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Post by Zero on Apr 18, 2018 2:29:53 GMT
Much better. Since now she can't lift the equivalent of the jesus statue in Rio and one-shot people without going near full power, though the durability's a bit vague, might still keep an eye on that, just in case.
Anyway, that'll do. Accepted, waiting for second approval.
1/2
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Post by The Yellowist on Apr 18, 2018 11:33:48 GMT
I think we're ready to get going.
2/2.
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